Tuesday, September 1, 2009

Haiku, How's This For Starters . . .

Did a haiku for the NavWorks Challenge today: How's This For Starters. . .

The starter line I chose was "Nature raved angrily..." We are allowed to alter the line slightly and, as you can see, I did. 

Nature raved . . .
                  Daddy's eyes flashed,
                  Mommy threw dishes.

I also wrote a second version (9-1-09). The two feel like they belong together:

Nature raved . . .
                   Mommy's eyes flashed,
                   Daddy thundered.